Myself
My name is Adri Syahputra. Everyone calls me Adri. I live in Pariaman. I was born on March 4th 1990. I have four brothers and five sisters. I am the fourth child in my family. I have black skin, pointed nose, brown eyes, tall and thin.
I like music very much. I like to play music and sing song. I always listen music when I felt bored and sometimes I sang a song to entertain myself. Besides that, I also like taking photos. I always take pictures that I think is interesting such as my friends, my family, and a nice view pictures.
I study in Padang State University. My majoring is English Literature. When I was at Elementary until Junior High School, I was a diligent and smart student. I always got good marks and I also one of good students in the class. At Senior High School, everything has changed. I became a bad and a lazy student. It made myself become bad. I tried to improve it, but I still cannot. I will keep try to change that.
I am a kind person. I like to help someone who needs my as long as I can help them. I am friendly, easy going and loyal person but I am a talk less person. The things that I really hate are; I hate someone who cannot keep a promise and tell lies to me. Besides that, I also have bad habits such as; I am a lazy person and often pending something that I will do. Therefore, I often unfinished my homework on time. I have tried to change it, but I still cannot. I hope I can to change that bad habit slowly.
In conclusion, I am a person that likes music very much, taking photos, a diligent, kind and smart, but I am a talk less person. I hate person who is a liar. I hope I can to change my bad habit slowly and get good life in the future on my life.
you need to improve your structure, but keep writing.
BalasHapusi agree with idef'd comment
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sing song = sing a song (2nd paragraph)
BalasHapusgood essay , keep writing ;)